UN ORU PAARVAI ENN MANATHAI THALARAVIDHUTEY EN ANBE,
UN PUNNAKAIYIL EN ETHAIYATHUDIPU KHOODUTHEY ............
ALAGIYA ILLAM MAHLAIYIL,UNATHU POR PAHTHANGAL PADHA THARIYIL VIZHUM POOVAKHA MAARA AASAI PADHUKIRENNE,EN UYIRE...............
UNNATHU ULLASAMANA,MANAPOOKKU UNNATHU MALALAI POL KHUNATHAI KAATTHUTHEY..................ITTHAI YELLAM THOORATHIL IRUNTHU RASIKUM EN KANGAL,IRAVU VEHLAIYIL EN THOOKATTHAI KALAIKHUTHEY.............EN AARUYIRE!!!!
nice poem,nice wording....u just need to correct certain wording like en uyire 2 en khadale....u just improve little wording than it vil be great...good luck 4r ur futere gurl.MAY GOD BLESS U.
ReplyDeletePLZ UPLOAD MORE POEMS SO WE CAN ENJOY READING IT.GOOD LUCK GURL
ReplyDeleteThanks 4r the comments,and wishes.
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